Thursday, September 2, 2010

Ashley's Waltz by Taylor Kincaid

Title: Ashley’s Waltz: Why Angels Dance Book One
Author: Taylor Kincaid
Publisher: Red Rose Publishing
Publication Date: 2010
ISBN: 978-1-60435-724-0
Genre: Mainstream, Fantasy/Inspirational
Length: 31 pages
Heat Level: n/a NOT A ROMANCE
Other: n/a
Reviewer: S. K. Fero
Date: 9-2-10

This was a sweet, sad story about a guardian angel and an abused child. For readers interested in this subject, you will enjoy it.

Mary Lou’s work as a guardian angel is often a challenge. Watching over four-year-old Ashley is one of her biggest challenges. The sweet little girl has a mother more interested in herself and making her horrible boyfriend happy than in caring for her defenseless daughter.

While the storyline and characters touched my heart, I found the story dragging me through it. There was almost no dialogue to pull the reader along. I felt the writer had a good idea but needed to hone the writing more.

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